A vow of silence
remained in our midst,
I tried to converse
but for peace I must now resist.
A feeling of sadness
engulfed my soul,
reminiscing me of our dreams
that were beyond control.
Silence was the
cessation of my wishes,
I don't wanna dream
more of blisses.
Being scared,
I can't scream aloud,
your feelings leapt like
the sun hiding behind the cloud.
I tremble each and every moment,
yearning for you,
to be the old you,
just that alluring smile will do.
This silence is enough
to wreck me down.
The tempest of thought ensuing,
wraps me all around.
I'm sailing alone
on this life's boat,
Now, I'm tired and want you
with that old musical note.
Awesome line...
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